Tuesday, January 29, 2013

Mouth: Trifecta Challenge

You could hear the beat, mmpf mmpf mmpf mmpf, 3 blocks away and the cars were strewn about the street parked somewhat legally.  The line streamed out into the parking lot and we gathered our IDs that we probably wouldn't have to show.  We eagerly watched boys in puffy pants and girls in sequined tops get gobbled up as they entered the mouth of the underground club through a haze of fake smoke and laser lights that seeped out of the shredded curtains at the entrance.  We gathered our courage, swallowed our pills imprinted with Buddha, and walked up to the door.  This was going to be a night to remember. 

20 comments:

  1. Oooohhhh....what happened next????

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    1. This is a great story. You'll have to come back for more.

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  2. What is happening? More information!

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  3. Oh. Morbidly pertinent today. "Brazil Nightclub Fire Kills At Least 233 People"

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  4. Very intriguing. Will there be more...

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    1. I may be persuaded to add to this one. It is a fun beginning isn't it?

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  5. Imprinted with Buddha? I had no idea they came that way. Sounds like the beginning of a heck of a night...

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  6. Although I don't do the club thing, I found this to be a very interesting piece! (: Great job!

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    1. Thanks...I haven't done the club thing for many many years, but it was fun remembering.

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  7. I want to hear the rest of the story!

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  8. Well if that didn't capture the feel of the club scene I don't know what does. Great opening. Pills imprinted with buddha - intriguing.

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  9. I remember puffy pants and sequined tops . . . :)

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  10. It made me giggle-the puffy pants,the fake smoke,the Buddha imprinted pills-great scenario:-)

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